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Fire - Chauncey Watson 1.5Ending is too abrupt and the writing is awkward. Insta-love, which I don't mind, but there was nothing in the story to make the attraction understandable or believable.Also, what happened to the babysitter? No one cares if s/he survived? The parent doesn't give the sitter more than a passing thought (and only once, to wonder what happened), the kid never even mentions the sitter, etc.,. What kind of people are these?