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To Keep a Smile - Valentina Heart A sweet story, but it felt like:1) not much of Noah's character is filled in (He's famous, flirty, and ...faithful? That's about it. Zach's character isn't much better known.),2) the development of their relationship is skipped over/squeezed into a short paragraph stating basically that they texted and talked a lot,3) the ending comes too soon and it's like the last 1/4th (1/5th?) of the story is missing.